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Cheshir's avatar

The contrast between the house and the style so far...so cool! I guess it's a callback to the pencil-drawn memories? Very cool. The house feels both real and unreal in this moment.

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William of Zeno's avatar

Very observant! That and wanting it to be a little reminiscent of a haunted house. Thanks for "reading" the visuals, too. :)

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IJen Chen's avatar

Great job !

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William of Zeno's avatar

Thank you!

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Gillian & Li'l Bean's avatar

I love your use of eyes to tell the story - very expressive!

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William of Zeno's avatar

Thanks, Gillian! Expressions have definitely been a focus of mine since jumping into comics. 🥴

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Leon Leung's avatar

The foreshortening in that first panel is such a flex. Nice job 👍🏼

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William of Zeno's avatar

Haha, thanks, Leon! :)

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Jeanine's avatar

Holy cow! The illustration of the house is incredible! 😱

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William of Zeno's avatar

Thank you thank you, you’re too kind! 🙂

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AC133's avatar

The house!! 🤩

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William of Zeno's avatar

Thank you! I was like ya know, I coulda gone for a simpler rendition, as I was doing it 😬

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